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The one true desire I hold to me heart
The undying sense of having that one feeling
The one feeling that sets you apart from all other
The one feeling that makes us our own individual beings
Love

The simple sensation of peace and tranquility between to people
The connection that two individuals share
The unwanted hate for that nobody cares
The exuberant and zany actions for that sharing, intimate feeling
The emotion that leads you to a lifestyle of wanting and needing
Love

Love is a blind emotion one that can’t be controlled
But yet with love it’s the undying suffering of pain to a single soul
A soul that was once loved yet neglected
But with great suffering comes true happiness
And to this great feeling, we all need
Love
©2005-2009 ~sparklychan
:iconsparklychan:

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my twinny Mcakay wrote this, it's a poem about love.. i think it's really good but he thinks it's crap... i said id put it up and see what thers think.... so yeah... what do you think.... be honest.....

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:iconmdonut281:
okay, honestly?

HONESTLY?

Well, it isn't crap. In fact, I think it's pretty awesome. Nicely thought-out, it shows. Hmm... I think I'll just...

*STAMPED with awesomeness and... STAMPED with favoriteness*

C ya, keep up the good work!

~donut

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I seem to have forgotten how many memories and ghosts roam these halls.

Ghosts and memories, that is, of something that was once... the world.
:iconsparklychan:
thank you man!!! thanks for the fave!!!!

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never play leap~frog with a unicorn!!!!
Riri + Roro = hyper, random, retarded, 'high on pizza' domino twins^^
:cowtwo: make :milk: which go well with :cookie:
(\ /)
~( º ..º)
nnm m
:iconmdonut281:
You're welcome, any time. Good work should always be appreciated.

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I seem to have forgotten how many memories and ghosts roam these halls.

Ghosts and memories, that is, of something that was once... the world.
:iconsparklychan:
thank you... i'm glad you like it!! ^^

--
never play leap~frog with a unicorn!!!!
Riri + Roro = hyper, random, retarded, 'high on pizza' domino twins^^
:cowtwo: make :milk: which go well with :cookie:
(\ /)
~( º ..º)
nnm m

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